Vanessa's Digital Story
Vanessa has such a great voice for storytelling-her voice sounds so laid-back and unscripted. The informal tone makes you feel as if you're sitting right in front of her as she tells the story of her upbringing. I love the elements of humor that she has woven into her story, especially near the end where she says, "We grow organically and raise free-range chickens, but we also eat at McDonald's and Burger King."
I really don't have any criticism for her video, but I guess it may have jumped around in the beginning. The middle towards the end seemed to be much more coherent.
Jared's Digital Story
Jared truly knows how to paint a picture with his words. He is a very descriptive storyteller and has a knack for creating powerful imagery within a mere couple of sentences. The art of travel can open some pretty big doors, as is evident in Jared's digital story. The only criticism that I would have for him would be the audio quality-there seemed to be some static or something in the background.
Amber's Digital Story
Amber's story was touching. Even though she didn't use her voice, it was heard throughout the emotional story about her grandmother and how she served as a daily inspiration to her. The choice of music complemented the story's tone as well. The only suggestion that I would have for her would probably be to reevaluate the brevity of such an emotional story.
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